So I guess I should actually start this thing. I'm not actually going to write my personal reactions concerning any specific topic; rather I'm going to post bits of writing. Each post will be the beginning of a short story, idea, or some kind of similar creative writing, with each piece hopefully being around one to two pages. My goal is to get feedback on the various pieces. And hopefully, along with this feedback you'll give me recommendations for change. The topics for each entry will be varied, some will be more abstract then others, but for each post I'm just looking for what you people like and dislike.